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Studio Brief 02 | Product, Range and Distribution Brief | Breastfeeding Controversy - Final Feedback & Prints

Final feedback

  • Prefer the red, blue and green carton toned down so the pink carton is more visual. 
  • The stickers of the pink cartons which has a pink ring around it has positive remarks.
  • When applying the facts onto the poster was not aesthetically appealing as it made the poster overcrowded. 
  • Create a brief based on breastfeeding in public.
  • There was a bit of a challenge for me to choose between which poster should be part of my final submission. So in the end, I decide to submit a series of poster designs. 
  • A leaflet might be appropriate to accommodate to the work I am currently producing. 

Final prints
When printing my final products I decide to print out on the stain/glossy paper for the four final posters and for the stickers in a matte material. 

originally asked for my stickers to be printed out in A4. However, it came out in an A3 size at first I was going to ask to reprint the stickers due to the incorrect sizing. Nevertheless the A3 size looked a lot better as the writing is more visual. If I printed in A4 the chosen typeface that I choose is quite a difficult typeface to read. Therefore I am happy with the results of the stickers. 

With the stickers as I made them on Photoshop. I could not use the vinyl machines to precisely cut them out in circular shape. So therefore I had to hand cut them out individually with a craft knife. 

The posters prints came out very well. The colours were consistent like it was displayed on the screen, the glossy finish established the authority and importance of the posters message. The only part which I could not decide was to either to keep the white border around the poster or to cut it off. 

In the end, I took one of the borders off one of the mock up ones. It did look a lot better without it. So I decided with taking off all the white borders edges off the final posters.

Below are the finishing results: 


 



 





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