OUGD603 | Extended Practice | Brief 09 | Development 2 | OOHDEER Brief

OUGD603 | Extended Practice | Brief 09 | Development 2 | OOHDEER Brief - Pitch A Papergang competition!

Colour Schemes & Origami Patterns
Below are the images of the Origami illustration with the colour schemes.

Origami Cranes

Origami Stars

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The lighter pastel colours definitely stand out more, it's softer for the eyes.
The vivid bright colours can be a quite harsh to the eyes.
Like the shape of the origami Cranes and Stars. The three dimensional shape gives them more dimension maybe try and add darker shades to define the three dimensional look you're going for.
The sunset colour scheme is nice for the cranes.
All designs look great could imagine them use for wrapping paper!
Maybe try and outline the vectors to a different colour. For example for the darker colours you added a white outline so it defines the three dimensional shape?
Like how it's paper theme and colours relating to the name of the competition 'Papergang'.
If you didn't tell me the concept/background of the designs I wouldn't of known that the stars are also origami. They look like 3D stars illustrative.
Like how minimalistic and simple the design is, could be used for a lot of stationary products.
Pastel colour scheme reminds me an unicorn concept.
Maybe add a background shape to the design. Looks a bit plain and isolated.

By taking the feedback to consideration as to choosing which design to upload to the competition. There was a tie between both the origami Cranes and Stars vector as they were both equally popular. Whilst the colour scheme the lighter and pastel was more appealing to the eye. I will experiment with the more pastel colour theme and add a background shape to make the design look slightly busy.

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