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Study Task 02 - Critique: Yorkshire Sculpture Park Logo - Feedback

In this session, we were put into small groups to critique each peers individual work on the Study Task 02: Symbol of the Yorkshire Sculpture Park, we went on a research visit to.

 Here are my finished symbols that I designed for the YSP which I thought would be suitable:






 Feedback from Peers and Year Tutor John
  • Building symbol is simple and easy to recognised 
  • Do more of a the black circle outline 
  • Like how it is simple 
  • Not too much detail on the buildings i.e - windows as it is hard to see from a distance
  • The scale would be too tiny for the detail on the building 
  • It would be good if the building or sculpture would be in a silhouette, just the black
  • Balance it on the side of the green circle 
  • No need for the YSP lettering
  • Changing to a black circle, only focusing on the building 
  • Sticking with possibly nature/natural colours

 Overall, I believe that my symbols were a success as they demonstrated the YSP (Yorkshire Sculpture Park). I got good comments/advice back and as well as compliments for my symbol designs.
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