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OUGD603 | Extended Practice | Feedback on Petalk, Our Generation & Starpack Packaging

Feedback on Extended Practice Briefs

Starpack Luxury Tins
  • To seal the packaging at the pop seal it with a sticker
  • To seal the packaging put a magnet between the two lids
  • Plastic wrapper around the plastic (metal packaging) luxury impression
  • Or using the origami box and to fit a paper box around it
  • Do not paint as stroke marks 

Our Generation
  • This Generation is quite board title
  • Our Generation is more suitable title 

Petalk
  • Rabbit logo is good for campaign 
  • The third rabbit vector is the best 
  • The thinner typeface is better than the bold as it's more approachable. 




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